What is your opinion?
Amazing start
"You've captured the downfalls of friendships perfectly when it comes to bestfriends to lovers. The awkwardness involved and surrounding the friends can be felt. I enjoyed your writing and style of writing. The story overall is enjoyable. It does get hard to read at some stages due to grammar and incorrect spelling but it isn't a train smash. Some words and letters are swapped around instead of saying in the author will put on. Though as thought, but you can easily overlook it and enjoy this one-shot. The author has done a really good job telling this story."
Nice work
"Despite in time of writing this review, the story has only one chapter, it’s interesting and captivating. Your writing style is intriguing and I like the how you use words :) It was great read, hopefully, I’ll have a chance to read more of it ❤️ Thank you for sharing ❤️❤️"
Off to a Great Start!
"I can already see many promising elements in this book despite it only being 1 chapter long at the time of writing this review. Your writing is elegant, your vocabulary rich and colourful and your descriptions vivid and effective. I did notice a few grammar mistakes here and there but it's nothing that a thorough revision can't solve (perhaps you may want to use some sort of support such as Grammarly or something along those lines). I would also advice that you try to avoid always referring to your characters by their name. I noticed this especially with Juliet. Instead of something like (for example): "Juliet looked at the buildings, feeling anxious. She was never this insecure but Juliet didn't know why she felt like this." you could write: "Juliet looked at the buildings, feeling anxious. The girl/woman/female was never this insecure but she didn't know why she felt like this.". I feel that'd help improve your already-beautiful narrative. Finally, if you're going to write a compilation of short stories, maybe you might want to consider establishing some sort of subtle connection between all the characters. I'm sure your readers would have a wonderful time trying to explore how a number of seemingly-unrelated stories come together at some point. All in all, I think your wonderful writing style makes this book very promising. With just a little bit of polishing I'm sure you'll have a real gem of a book for your readers to enjoy. Keep up the great work!"
