What is your opinion?
A wonderful start!!
"The first three chapters, whilst containing a few grammatical and structural errors (Normal in a draft and easily fixable), established a solid story and setting revolving around 2 highly relatable characters. I found myself sympathising with Nur (my girl needs a win) and rooting for her!! Excited to read the rest."
When you read poetry and feel every word of it, but that feeling is captured in this novel...
"What was amazing about this book is how it kept my interest peeked and my emotions was stringed along with each sentence. I loved how all the emotions and perspectives was so well explained while using a poetic way to portray it. I would recommend this story for someone looking for a novel with a unique plot, but with a realistic build up of romance, while also each perspective is so well explained. The only thing I would critique is that sometimes the grammar wasn't the best, but overall very well written story. "
Insane
"Very good ,original and creative. A true potential writer "
Story was amazing
"Didn't see anything wrong and there for if you are reading this review to see if you would be interested in it I say I did and that you should too."
Good
"i loved this story over all and i have recommended this book to my bf and i know that he too is going to love this."
Before I turn insane
"This story made me cry and laugh at the same time. Both main characters seemed so relatable. Reading this story made me grateful and mindful of other people prejudice. I do hope this author writes more. The story was not dragging but enough plot twist to make me wonder and answer my curiosity. Well doen to the author"
Beautiful narration!!
"I love this authors ability to write meaningful words. A lot of what she writes is just beautiful. The first chapter and premise really hook you in and make you want to know what’s going on. I think this book deserves more reads! "
Epic. Magnificent
"I loved the details I loved the fact that I kept reading on, no doubt it was interesting So anyone can read it and enjoy 😊"
5 star
"Truly worthy of the rating. Should read for sure."
Sounds promising
"The storyline is really good and it feels so real. You feel like you're living in the story. Everything is on point. Really glad that I came across this one. Keep writing. Best wishes !!!"
Enthralling read!
"I have read quite a few chapters so far, and I honestly love your characters. The dialogue between them is captivating! There are some grammar and wording issues, for example, there’s a sentence where you say the customer is “always rarely” there, if I remember right. I’d suggest a read through or running it through prowritingaid to help fix. I’d like to see a bit more descriptions in your first chapter and maybe some character descriptions too. I felt like the scenes skipped around a bit in chapter 1-2. However, despite this, I wanted to keep reading! This was hard for me to put down now that I have to get to work! I’ll be back for more!"
A Solid 4
"This story was a good solid 4 overall. It's hard to rank it lower or higher in each portion as it settles nicely there. Talking about the positives first: This book does a nice job exploring different perspectives of real people and their thoughts. Of course, this is a work of fiction but the author does a nice job fleshing the characters out enough that they don't fall flat. There are also very nicely written passages sprinkled in through the narrative which help to give it life. I enjoyed the perspectives these characters had in their environments and how the author chose to describe the scenes. When something is awkward - it's awkward, when something is sad - it's sad. Each chapter has its own mood that flows with the timeline of the book. Now, the negatives are why this book does not excel. The author has a good foundation, but it's unfortunately muddied by grammar and sentence structure problems. Some sentences, while grammatically correct, leave you needing to re-read them to understand. Many paragraphs are just super long sentences that would have benefitted from being broken up. The dialogue is also iffy in some places but my major gripe with it is that it becomes confusing as to who is exactly talking. If more than one individual is talking it becomes hard to distinguish which line and who. There is also an overuse of caps in some of the dialogue instead of showing/telling the reader the volume is screaming. While I did mention that the author does a great job of getting the mood and the reader invested in the emotion - sometimes it's way too much of the same thing. This book is very angsty and it becomes tiresome to continue reading in one sitting. The reasons are justified but I just wish there was more flavor and variety. Between its positives and negatives, it's simply a solid 4."
