What is your opinion?
Amazing
"The beginning of the story is very intriguing, and the portrayal of relationships between employer and boss is amazing. I love it. "
A cute beginning and hilarious MCs
"The cat is adorable, and it definitely helps for the author to signal when each MC is talking so we don't get confused. It would be interesting for a cat to get a job and drool over a boss though . . . The human MC is funny and has personality for days. The dialogue's cute and gives us a sense of the atmosphere in the job site. There were some grammatical errors, mostly when it came to dialogue. Punctuation needs to go inside of the quotations, and unless the sentence inside the quotes is finished or there's a proper noun right after, any words following the quotes should be lower case. I like where this is going, and leaving out the initial meeting between the MC and the boss really makes us curious as to what happened to make her all flustered. "
KITTIE TALES
"I already love the book and I haven’t even started yet. I recommend it to everyone. Cheers! "
Amazing story, would strongly recommend
"Setting: Your setting was good, I felt like I could tell where the story was going on and I liked how much detail you gave to the boss's boss office, I would think if you put that much detail into every location it would make it easier to visualize. Overall though the setting was perfect. Characters: The characters were great, I liked how relatable they were and how They weren't all the same/bland etc. I can't think of anything to improve in that department :) Plot: I think the plot was strong in most ways but in some parts from Alessandra's perspective it was a little confusing, especially trying to keep all the bosses straight. Overall I got the basic understanding but maybe it could be a little clearer. Other then that there were some punctuation errors with dialogue but there were very few grammatical errors which is hard to achieve. I loved your story so much, thank you for posting and I will DEFINITELY check this story again to find out what happens next. -tabby "
Adorbs
"This concept reminds me of a book I read as a child where the whole thing is told from the dog's perspective and the doggy is reincarnated when it dies into different dogs and eventually in it's last life ends up being the dog of his first human when the human is an adult (literally, made me bawl when I was kid - for the life of me I can't remember the name, but its one of the few books that has stuck with me, so I appreciate the nostalgia you provided) That being said, I almost wish this story was told entirely from our kittie hero's perspective! It's so endearing and fun and honestly can add a lot of mystery to the story. That's just my opinion though. The plot is interesting, although I'm reviewing at four chapters so obviously I haven't seen too much of it yet. I do think the summary is too long, I'd shorten that a bit because you want to pull people in and that's often done with something short and sweet. The grammar and punctuation needs some work, there were parts that were difficult to get through because of it - just doing some proofreading or using Grammarly would do wonders. The writing style could also use some development, esp with describing characters. We don't need that much info about what she's wearing because it feels out of place in the text, esp since it's coming from a cat. Maybe mention a piece of clothing that the cat might specifically find interesting? You don't want to pull us from the narration by giving an info dump that's not necessarily relevant or something the narrator would attend to, so keep that a little more wrapped within the text. Also, I think a bit more of showing instead of telling would be helpful. Overall, though, I love the idea and think it's very cute and the plot is engaging, the execution just needs a bit of work. Kudos, though! And thanks again for the hit of nostalgia!"
