What is your opinion?
A thrilling story with dark concepts
"Hey Lesha! I really enjoyed this book you wrote, and I can definitely say that you nailed the dark atmosphere for the situations that both Kate and Jack are in! It was certainly a plot twist when you connected both Kate's prostitution life with Jack's drug dealer life near the end of what you have so far! You also really nailed how people have to do some extreme things to provide for their family when they're poor. Seeing Kate struggle with the abuse of her pimp and job, and how then forced Jack to leave his mom and get forced into the drug trade by his friends was very heartbreaking, and seeing how they ended up at the end of the book so far, really stuck to me, because they went through hell in a matter of days, and are trying their best to just be reunited with each other and make amends. Overall, you did an awesome job with the dark themes in this book, and it really resonated with me, because unfortunately, there are a lot of people out there who go through things just like this. Some minor things to work on is just the grammar of this book. You're missing a lot of quotation marks whenever someone is speaking, it was a little hard to read because of that. You also have a few misspellings here and there that I had to read the sentence a second time to know what was going on. In the end, this book is amazing! Just need some major adjustments to the grammar. Great job!"
Scarry indeed.
"I thought the story was interesting, to say the least. Because it was scary because of what happened that it was realistic in some ways. Like all stories but it just had a very underlying scary bit."
Dark dream
"I love your book darling, it's so creative,I won't complain our about spelling errors and please update soon "
Tragic
"Life is hard and sometimes you wonder where you went wrong. This applies to both Kate and Jack. They care about each other and they are family but it's so hard. It's funny since Kate knows that she can't be lecturing Jack if she doesn't change her line of her work and how she lives her life but it's the only way that she can provide for him. What's she supposed to do? I hope the two reunite under some positive circumstances. There's got to to be someone who can help them because so far, they can't do it on their own. Definitely waiting to see what'll happen next."
Bad dream vs nightmares
"The overall plot is interesting. I would like to find out how they take a 180-degree turn. There are grammatical inconsistencies in some parts, but besides that, it's a great story so far. Hoping to find out what's next."
