What is your opinion?
To be deflowered
"This book was amazing I loved the plot of the families and their problems and how much they had to do to change and grow to be the people they were meant to be.. a caring family for everyone.. keep up the great work and I will be looking forward to the next book that you have written.. "
Too Be Deflowered
"Awesome Author, Funny, Sad, Family drama, Fights, Office drama, Infidelity, Accusations, Romantic, Wedding, Deflowering"
Amazing storyline
"I love this book, it's simply an amazing book with a talented writer . It felt like I was reading a real love story. "
Definitely an interesting story
"I like a lot in the book,sadly I don't think I will be able to put it into words enough, that being said if I had a disliked I think anjana personally being 1, she at times was a bit too hypocritical for me, though I would argue that I view that as a nitpick(personally). I don't think I have enough experience to say who would like this but I think young adults girls would see some aspects of themselves here. Maybe not all together but definitely some at the same time. While I didn't hate the male protag ,I have seen people refuse to give him a chance and will never forgive him. I honestly get most of their points but as someone who has seen shows as well as others grow to be better persons with a bit of motivation, he was ok. I'm happy he grew from what he was from the early chapters. Gave it 4 stars. Its not perfect (rarely anything is) but it has promise. Romance isn't my type of genre I typically mess with so take what I say with a grain of salt, I'm sure people who read the genre might have a different opinion but I can see myself coming back to it"
Deflowering Honesty
"Overall, this is a good story. A woman's romantic and professional life collides. It's a great concept. I'm not sure if English is your prime language, so bear with me. It was a challenge to read all the chapters, but I could follow your story. I'd recommend using free online editing resources, like Hemingway app (https://hemingwayapp.com/), or Outwrite (https://outwrite.com/invite?ref=c74d586eb5a2&name=michael-paul), . I usually use both. It also helps to have a "Text to Speech" to have your story audible. and see if it sounds as great as it is in your mind. Do not ever stop writing your stories. This one was good. You show great character interaction, believable dialogue, and relatable incidents for the main character and her "deflowering" journey. I look forward to your next story, which you will share with us by the fire place in our minds."
Anjana Deserves Better
"I spent basically the entire story hoping and praying that Anjana would realize she deserves a lot better from everyone and would up and leave and start a new life. Our main character is mistreated by pretty much EVERYONE in the book (minus her brother, bless his soul). Even her friends don't even seem all that protective of her when it was clear Tristano wasn't the best person. Our girl is strong and fierce (although she does tend to drag other people down, especially other women, to bring herself up), and she didn't deserve to end up with a guy that was so toxically masculine and usually put what he wanted over what she wanted every single time. Our girl deserves a better life and better relationships, and I will stand by that statement forever"
