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Love it
"Interesting.... Update more"
Love Me Dragon
"At first, I thought the story was about a college age woman because it began with the main character working as a cleaning lady for a record company. She also spoke of a campus, but didn't elaborate. As the story progressed, her personality seemed to regress. I don't have a problem with immature characters, it just threw me for a loop. She was portrayed as a normal human, but I may have missed something. For example, my female protagonist has a longer lifespan than humans, so her maturity level is that of a young adult, which probably seems odd to a reader who learns that her age is over 100. In your story, the characters interact with each other vaguely, but the one things that was very clear was the love and passion between the two main characters. That was constant throughout the story. I enjoy a good love story, especially when I can get a sense it was written by someone who has been, or is still, deeply in love. I get that sense from your story. That's what made it beautiful. As for the grammar and English, some chapters were better than others. The style kept changing. There were many errors, but because the story was so adorable and sweet, I continued reading regardless. I would have preferred less graphic love scenes, but to each his own. I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the great work!"
Good
"Read if interested in fantasy. "
Recommended
"Interesting "
Author Note
"Hello Thank you for reading ♥ "
