What is your opinion?
Wonderful Story!
"Your story is wonderful and I really like it. However, you are not using enough punctuation. For example, "I look around the room for my spot to sit at until I lock eyes with her mom wasn't lying when she said she changed a lot over the years." This sentence has a couple of errors. Instead, it should be, "I look around the room to find a spot to sit at until I lock eyes with her, mom wasn't lying when she said she changed a lot over the years." There are more sentences such as these. You are able to portray stuff other authors aren't able to, like emotions and etc. But I feel like you lack in writing style and I agree with @GrantAyers that you tell rather than show. But other than that it is a great book. -Akila Athen"
Great Technique
"So the author is talented to say the very least. Like she knows how to write a stutter and how to portray emotion. And I think that's very important to the story. The thing that she lacks though is writing style as she tells rather than shows. This is pointed out when her longest "chapter" is just a whole page of her describing her characters instead of just showing us what they look like. With all said and done though I would read it again. So five stars."
Multiple pov
"As someone who isn't keen on mc, it's nice to have multiple povs. There's a good conversation about being trans. Female to male, and I appreciate it."
