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Drugs And Their Aftermath

"Good, Thoughtful, Impactful Writing!! Well worth Reading. The Author pulls no punches but states the Truth as it is.. Readers, try it, I think you will enjoy the experience👍"

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Great story.

"So the author is clever and the story is very good once you delve four chapters into it, very long chapters that I think could have been split up into at least two or three chapters by themselves individually. And they have a consistency to brick together dialog with the story making it look like a brick of words. Like the first two paragraphs, then it gets better to read in the third and fifth paragraphs, only to revert to the bricks in the seventh and tenth paragraphs. And I don't know if it's me but with those very long chapters and to just power through it and read it was a bore. Like I don't think I remember a spelling mistake so great for the author. The formatting is terrible for the reasons I've already mentioned. Okay and now for the story right,.. I got a lot from the first chapter, made the whole thing feel like an info dump after an info dump with every character's backstory and life. Like we as readers or just simply I as a reader don't need to know this unless there is going to be an easter egg of this info in later chapters. And in that case, let that easter egg show those characters' backstories instead of just info dumping it in the first chapter. It just slows down the story to a snore pace."

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