What is your opinion?
Enchanting
"I personally love Phyla as a badass character. I would suggest shorter paragraphs for easier reading but other than that it was an amazing read and I hope the author continues to write like this."
Great
"So I would say if you just broke up your paragraphs this would be a five-star rating all the way down. That and if you maybe bump the speed up a little bit. But that's just a suggestion. Either way, it was a good two-chapter read."
Amazing!
"Amazing!!! Such marvelous writing. Seems like you are really naturally at telling stories. I really loved the way you described the characters and the kingdom. Can't really wait for the next part. Well to be honest, I really don't read much. But, This sure did catch my attention and I would recommend everyone to just get a cup of coffee or tea and read this Author's magical work."
Impressive
"I liked the writing style of the author as it keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. I recommend this to everyone who like fantasy stories."
Nailed it .!
"Definitely, I liked the details portrayed for every thing, situation and people in every aspect. There's scope for improvement, but doesn't look like it's the author's first story. I recommend this to everyone who never found a story to start under fantasy genre. Chapter one ending at a cliffhanger...!!! What more do readers want and what more would keep us waiting for the next one."
A good start!
"I like the writing style of this author, it's a good start to the story, hopefully we get more like this. "
