Eyes Can Lie by Moumisaki at Inkitt
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Eyes Can Lie

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Summary

Sayuri is 15 years old high school girl. One day, she suddenly came to notice some mishaps that was going around her small town. Then she and her friends started to dig into those mishaps to search for the truths of these happenings. Main Characters: Sayuri Kobayashi (MC/narrator). Ray Hanazaki. Tomori Tachibana. Mirai Kimizuki.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
4.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

BEGINNING


I was often told, what we see with our own eyes are always true. So, I also believed in that saying.





My parents raised me gently with care and morals. I was living a happy life that everyone desires. Now I'm at my first year of high school. I'm Sayuri. Sayuri Kobayashi.





I have friends who holds me dear to them. My Mom and Dad, does everything for my sake. For my happiness. And that's why, for their sake, I'll do anything. Anything that is necessary to keep them happy and safe.





So, I was doing what I can, to accomplish my goals to make my future a good one. And my daily life was going well.





One day at school, our regular classes started. When our Homeroom teacher came in and announced, "Students, today we have a transferred student with us. Please come in and introduce yourself."





A dark haired boy entered the classroom and stood in front of us. He said, "Hello everyone, my name is Ray Hanazaki. Please take care of me from now on." His character seemed to be a bit shy though. Well it doesn't matter to me.





So, just like that, our days were passing by in peace. But one day I noticed something. It felt like something is up with this place. Something really unusual. By this place I mean, our school, our locality, our small town. It felt like, something is not right. Something wrong is happening for quite some times now. I was just so caught up with my own life that it took forever for me to notice it.





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Author's Note:





I apologize if the 1st chapter is too short and there's a ton of grammar and tense mistake. Since I want start the main story from 2nd chapter.
Now about this story, I started writing it one year ago. And I did made some progress through the plot. But after that I couldn't make up where to take the storyline. Then I thought maybe I will eventually find out where to take it if I started writing here. So wish you will like it. Well I'm not sure anybody would even want to read or not.





Now about the characters, Sayuri is a 15 years old high school girl. I'll add some character tabs in the description.

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Only finished chapter one and I am intrigued. I like how you're already drawing me in...your writing style is clean, also. I will be reading more!

4 years

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