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So-far so-good

"I haven't read the full story yet but I have the first three chapters. I enjoy it so far. The plot is compelling and it's keeping me interested. Although, I found things moved a little too fast in the first chapter but overseeing that, the story so far is great read for fantasy fans like myself. I'll definitely continue reading. 4.5/5"

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Promising

"The story is good so far. Very gripping and has a good flow."

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Fantastic.

"Chapter 8 is great! It is fun reading how everyone involved grows stronger and learns how to use powers to win the fight that they all need to win. Still need to be proof read for spelling errors but over all on a scale of 1 to 10, I give it an 8. Can not wait until the rest of the book comes out."

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