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Minnala

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Summary

Minnala is a story about a young lady who fights against her ugly fate that began when she got bethroned. But she fell In love with a wrong man who also happens to be her bethroned brother.

Genre
Romance
Author
Loveliss
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

In the mansion of one of the top five billionaires, there are several maids doing different chores. Some of the maids and guards escort Mr Frederick to the sitting room but they didn't follow him in. He looked at his sons of which he called up on.

"good morning Dad",they greeted,

"good morning", he said and took his seat. Just then his phone rang, he looked at the caller and smiled.

"hello my dear friend and in-law", he said to Mr Lewis. Mr Lewis is a man with two daughters in which one of them is Minnala who found out of recent that the family she grew up with are not her biological parents. As time goes on, the Lewis company began to face some challenges and nearly go bankrupt but Mr Lewis has a friend who lives four state away from the state. He is a very rich and famous man but he's a man who didn't give things out for nothing. He decided with the condition of accepting his son as in law and Minnala fall victim.

Minnala tried to convince the family in finding another solution but was called an ingrate. After several abusive words and curses also with the fact that they brought her up even though they are not her parents weighed her down. She accepted to do what they want. Minnala mother died after giving birth to her but not before she named her. Minnala was later told that she'll be a maid for the Frederick's family for two years before getting married to the first son of the Fredericks.

Mr Frederick hanged up with a smile.

"that's your friend right?",

"hm, you are right. So Steve the lady will be arriving in two days time but I won't be around so I want you to be of your best behavior",

"seriously dad?,do I really have to marry that girl",

"I thought we've talked about this",

"but how can you made a maid before marrying brother with the excuse that she called you a BRAT", Misclolo emphasized,

Knowing his son intention,he said,"Steve is now 34years of age, Misc, you are 29 already,and you Dustin is already 26 while Janie is 21, but I can't see the difference of your mentality", he said and walked away.

"such an old man, saying meaningless things", Dustin said.


Some maids in the keeping were busy gossiping.

"did you heard about Sir Steve being bethroned", Meg started,

"sure,I even heard she is being made maid before she can marry him", Beth added,

"isn't that ridiculous?,Money and wealth is a bastard",

"you can say that again, moreover the masters are very handsome",Beth said,

"devils are always attractive",Meg added

"they are all ill mannered, arrogant,rude,lack respect,love ladies and partying",

"especially Steve,I don't like them",

"where's Janie,I haven't even seen him today",

"where else, he's by the pool,sleeping around like cat", Meg said and scoffed.

The four sons of Mr Frederick are not the serious type, though they are brilliant and competent but all they love doing is partying and flirting around and they have no respect especially Steve who hate Minnala already even though he has not set eyes on her yet.



Steve and Dustin were busy playing game while Janie and Misclolo are the spectators. They were still playing when Steve received a call from his dad.

"hello Dad",

"you should go get the girl now",

"What!?",

"yes, she's at the airport, dressed in black short and blue vest",

"Ok", he said and hanged up and continue playing the game,

"is the girl around?", Misclolo asked,

"she's a lady not a girl, and yes she is, dressed in black short and blue vest",he mimicked his father,

"so are you not going to pick her up", Dustin asked still playing,

"she should die there,am going no where",

"you shouldn't be so mean", Janie said with his head buried in his phone.

"you can go if you wish", he said nonchalantly.

No one volunteered to go to the airport and they all abandon her there.


(9 hours later)


Everyone has gone to the club except Janie who sat at home watching his favorite movie of his girlfriend, Juliet, who is a model. The program always start 11:00pm. He stood up to get more popcorn when he overheard a conversation.

"so you mean none of them volunteered to go and pick her",

"yes,they all abandoned her there",

"how wicked,I really feel for her",

"like those masters are really heartless",

Janie got pissed by the insults,

"of course they are,I don't wish to marry any of them",

"who will marry ordinary maids like us, you better stop dre......",

Janie walked away as he did not want to listen to any of their gossiping again. He went straight to his room.


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