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Finding You
"In my opinion. This was a Wonderful short book. I liked the writing style of the author. The main characters are Awesome. Thank you for writing this book.😊❤️😊"
Finding You
"YOO!😊 Thanks a lot for making this book which is truly a pleasant read! The flow of the story was engaging and it got me engaged from the start. What I admired most about your book was the simplistic storyline, yet realistic at the same time. It's nice to see that even within the short story you have written, you have managed to juggle several sub-plots like the mom-Brandon relationship, Layla-Thomas relationship etc. I loved the way you started off painting an emotional picture with dad’s envelope! Plotwise, it was super natural and I could relate very well with the character’s feelings. I adored the way you introduced Marley’s character through the convo at the Cinema which was hilarious!😂 I also didn’t expect Brandon to be a policeman and that twist was just amazing! Though the only small part which I found a bit unrealistic was Thomas being part of a gang in Detroit. I was just wondering how he ended up going to the same school for days when he couldn’t stay at one place for too long. I also wondered how Layla and Thomas became bf gf - a part which can be faintly elaborated. Nevertheless, I would say the way Marley and Peyton met and got together was simply cute! Now for language- I absolutely loved your writing style!😊 It’s simple, clear and free-flowing. That simplicity in writing made it so reader-friendly! I adored the mind voices which made me understand the character better! Dialogues seemed natural as well! It can be hard for such a short story but I feel descriptions of places could have been improved! There wasn’t much issue spelling and grammar wise but punctuation in dialogues seem to be an issue (adding a comma before the close inverted commas). Other than that, vocabulary can be slightly improved to make the work less mundane (e.g said was overused quite a lot which can be changed!) Other than that, great job!😊 All in all, I truly enjoyed reading this short, cute story! I loved how it wasn’t too fancy, just a natural, feel-good story which is just perfect for a quick read! It has great potential with some polishing and you have natural flair for writing so yea keep going!😆 I’m just a puny reader and these are just my personal opinions pls dun take it to heart HAHA Keep writing and keep shining! Cheers!😆🥞🥞"
Finding you
"I love the story. Short but enough to captivate a reader. Thank you❤️❤️"
best story i have read on this app so far
"overall the story was excellent till I have read it. just to mention I will be reading it further. I didn't get the whole idea for the plot but I think it will be good. the authors writing style is comfy to read. I did mention it before that her story resembled one of the novels I red years ago. sundae girl. your writing style and the characters are so light to take in. anybody who reads the review it is a must go for a light romance. don't go on the cover. good books don't need presentation. i wish the author a good time writing these kind of stories that bring smile and happiness to other peoples time."
