lillyann24

good read

I cant quite tell how good the story will continue since its only the first chapter but so far I would say I liked it. even though it wasn't exactly my genera. the characters inner conflicts were so realistic and it felt like the writer had experienced some kind of incident her self to pour feelings in to the dialogues. just not saying that she a heart disease.To whoever read this review so far go and give the story a try it would be worth it.

best story i have read on this app so far

overall the story was excellent till I have read it. just to mention I will be reading it further. I didn't get the whole idea for the plot but I think it will be good. the authors writing style is comfy to read. I did mention it before that her story resembled one of the novels I red years ago. sundae girl.
your writing style and the characters are so light to take in.
anybody who reads the review it is a must go for a light romance. don't go on the cover. good books don't need presentation. i wish the author a good time writing these kind of stories that bring smile and happiness to other peoples time.

Interesting.

it gave me magnus chase vibes. the idea is interesting with all these after life and chaos and demons.
in the first chapter that was technically introduction, third paragraph i think you shouldn't be introducing the main character like this his identity could be revealed all through the story that would be much better in my point of view.
the rest of it is fantastic., a very good read for people who like Norse mythology.

excellent.

I had difficulty starting to write this, deleted it for the third time to choose the right words to describe this master piece. I really love thriller and more than that I adored the way things started and went.

the moments feel to good to be real and with every passing of line you can hers you heart racing to wonder what will happen next.
the world building is good and the character go the same.
real page turner this is and i would like to have it in my book shelf someday.
there was nothing constructive to point out though while the author was generous to give me a bunch of advice.
whoever read down till here, have good read and a adventurous journey.

not my genera but an interesting topic I'd like to read.

Good writing and an excellent plot. if this wouldn't have been my genre maybe this would have been my best read. female lead is good, strong character.

Good

I cant say anything about the plot because only two chapter are out and nothing much was written to the description of the story. The writing style is good as well as the punctuation and grammar. and i really wish once it is fully uploaded it becomes peoples favorite book.

good.

I gave you three stars for the plot because i cant really tell how it will be after words since its just the beginning. Until I read it it was really interesting. keep up your work. I had a little problem with the 1st chapter but that didn't followed the others a head as they were loud and clear. your writing style is good and i really enjoyed reading it. those who read this review so far give this story a try.

good

It does look interesting and the book cover is beautifully disturbing which does guides to violence after in the story.
the characters were kind of confusing in the first chapter how they were named but relation not introduced with the main protagonist.
except that it is a good read.
also i shared it on twitter if that is not a problem with you.

a go read

I hope ill be coming back on this.
but you should really avoid writing she in every sentence maybe start with some other word, verb..
Who is Irene?
Would you like a read for a read.

good

barely anyone writes about god and angles but it was a good read. keep the job author.
and you may decrease the use of constant I in the manuscript that really diverts the attention.