What is your opinion?
This is great
"I like all of it like what it's talking about or like how descriptive it is I like how it it's written in the storyline you know I just want to say I read a lot of books on here and this is one of the better written ones"
A strong story teller
"This is a strong story, very much worth the read. I love the characters! I cannot wait for the continuation."
The Lost Princess
"I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. The author did a good job of drawing you in and making you care about the characters. I looked forward to the next book and finding out what is in store for Hailey. She has suffered many loses I hope she finds her own strength and happiness. "
Love.
" I have no dislike. The Author brings out the characters very well in him or her writing. So, real and alive and touching. Very good book to read. Thank you and one love."
The lost princess
"I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I am very curious as to what choices the new princess will make in her future. I hope you will continue this story "
Gold
"Love the book. Love the way you write. Don't worry about the punctuation and grammar, after all it's just the first draft. You can always edit them later on. I'll be waiting for the next update."
Amazing
"So there are a few things to say about this. It's an awesome chick-flick with two very strong and awesome female leads. The plot going up to chapter 5 is awesome. The two sisters Hailey and her younger one (I forget her name so I apologize) are some of the best characters in the story. And the plot only drives them to be better. Just within the first couple of chapters, you are hooked because Hailey is a beast, just an absolute girly girl that can stand up for herself. Mwah. Love it. The plot itself is a five-star for me. As for writing style, there are a few desperate attempts that the author goes for in terms of emotion. Now, this is just my opinion but there is such a thing as too much emotion. The book really gets drowned out in happiness and a little mellow drama. It's funny sure but I think it could be cut a little less. Either way, I don't think it's worth docking a star. But with that said the author's descriptions are good, her chapters are not too long nor are they too short and it gives off a nice flow. Great. Okay, this is the part that all authors dread. Technical writing skills. There were a few misspellings. Oh no! Kidding. Well not really. What I mean is not to be dramatic about how little this really matters to me as a reader. Now as a writer this kind of sucked because it got me thinking about how much I needed to edit my stories. But as a reader it really only made me lose focus a couple of times. (Author please go check out chapters 2 & 3) But I'll only dock one star for that. This story is a 14/15, which is a direct five-star book. Just off of the score alone, the author deserves this rating and I personally thought the story was amazing. So kudos."
The Lost Princess
"I love the book so far. The author seems to have a good understand of her characters and writes in a way that reveals just enough, but keeps up guessing. "
