Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Short and sharp but intriguing
"Hard to judge the plot yet as there is not much to go on. The internal torment of what is happening really comes through, but overall the story would benefit from more description of the surroundings. Less pace and more time taken to explain. A good start though."
Good
"I cant say anything about the plot because only two chapter are out and nothing much was written to the description of the story. The writing style is good as well as the punctuation and grammar. and i really wish once it is fully uploaded it becomes peoples favorite book."
