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Very Good!

"I like the plot, it's very original and gives Game of Thrones/Lord of the Rings vibes without feeling like it's a copy or not an original idea/world in its own rite. Rikar is a compelling character, and the prologue was used well - very clever that we're literally reading a book...within a book. There are some parts of the world building that could use clarifying - esp for the folks like me who don't read this genre often. I also feel that the romance aspect could be a bit stronger, but I feel this book is much more about the fantasy/adventure genre rather than romance whereas my writing is all romance so that's usually what I focus on - so take that with a grain of salt. Overall, very lovely writing - compelling and emotional. Some of the dialogue is choppy at times, especially exclamations, but nothing that takes away too much. I really have enjoyed reading this. Kudos!"

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Read it all the way

"it was a cool ride"

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Days with Dragons

"I really am enjoying the story so far. I also like that you gave us a little peek into the time after the "Bloodfeather incident" with Eric and Katrina. The way you make it seem like we are reading a book inside of a book is quite unique and I can't wait to see how it progresses. I am hoping we get to learn the names of ALL of Rubara's hatchling soon as well! All in all it seems great so far!!!!"

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No words

"I'm not a fan of this genre but this is definitely something that pulls me in. The story is really descriptive and everything is on point. I look forward to reading it."

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Amazing imagery

"I love this book! It’s really detailed and it keeps the reader hooked. I was a bit confused in the beginning but after I read on I understood. Keep going it’s a very good plot. "

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