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What is your opinion?
Fangs Out
"Very clear with the perspective and the inner thoughts. The author captured a vampire very well. However, there appear to be words that were skipped when writing and run-on sentences that could be broken up."
Fangs Out
"The chapter is an interesting read. I am sorry I didn't give you more stars, but there were a number of typos. I get the feeling, you know what you want to say and rush to type it all out. That said, you have a story that could be very exciting."
