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Coming Home For Christmas

"A sweet and humorous short story that was a delight to read "

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Coming home for Christmas

"… or “What happens when all has been said, but not everything has been heard” 🤭 Expect teenage love drama, messy situations, cringy decisions and a lot of humour to wrap up a heartwarming tale of young love into adulthood. "

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A Magical Tale of Love and Second Chances

"Heidi Mae’s Coming Home for Christmas is a heartfelt romance that captures the magic of love, forgiveness, and the holiday spirit. The novel excels with its vivid descriptions, turning Frost Crest into a living winter wonderland full of cosy homes, family traditions, and festive charm. This immersive setting perfectly complements the emotional journey of the characters, making it an ideal holiday read. Austin and Melody are relatable, with vulnerabilities that make their growth and connection feel genuine. Mae explores themes of personal discovery and the complexities of relationships with depth, while the supporting cast adds warmth and community to the story. Mae’s writing balances steady pacing, natural dialogue, and a mix of humour and emotion. Her evocative prose elevates the story, blending elegant simplicity with engaging detail. While following romance conventions, Mae’s storytelling stands out with emotional depth and rich settings. The themes of love, home, and second chances are explored with nuance, making the story both relatable and impactful. This touching holiday tale will appeal to fans of romance, offering a warm, memorable escape that celebrates love and family in the spirit of Christmas. "

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Wonderful piece!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

"A perfect start to my holiday season. I have always loved your stories that are lengthy and initially I was sceptical about this one being a short story. I am extremely impressed that you proved me wrong because this story kept me captivated and I was pretty much glued till the end. It was beautifully written and had good content. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. "

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Sweet story

"First loves that are forever are the best."

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Book

"I really like this book"

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sweet.. will make you reminisce about your childhood crush

"I would’ve wanted to know more about what happens next, but it gave me more than enough to gush and smile and feel the giddiness of being in love ❤️❤️❤️"

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Sweeter than hot chocolate with extra marshmallows!

"This is the second story from Heidi Mae I've read and I'm becoming addicted, I think... Love these two, perfect Christmas romance ! 💖💖💖"

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That was so refreshing 💕

"Oh my! We all need a Christmas like that ❤️ Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story 💓"

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Coming Home for Christmas

"Beautiful childhood love story . I love the characters and dialogue , the wholesome and clean love storyline and nice plot . Well done 👏👏👏👍👌"

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Awwww

"Such a cute short read. But amazing story line!"

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Cute story

"Heartwarming romance. Loved the length too. Even though it's short you don't feel it is hurried or skips parts."

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Coming Home for Christmas

"Enjoyed this excellent little story. So cute. Great story for Christmas time"

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Coming home for christmas

"A lovely Christmas story"

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Relaxing Read!

"It’s a fun, light, easy read. I am waiting to see what happens next! This is my second book by Heidi and she is my favorite author so far. It’s a happy sweet book. "

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Coming Home For Christmas

"Definitely a good short and sweet romance novel. Wished it was a little bit long to add in some more detail. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. I really enjoyed the story and the laughter. Caught myself laughing because of the relatable things Melody did that I have done. Great book!"

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Much ado about nothing!

"Not going to lie but I slept through this one. The story doesn’t progress."

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