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What is your opinion?
Why must this beginning torture me so?? 😭😭
"What a start to a book!! I need more more more!! 💗💗 besides some grammer issues the flow of it really isn't that bad. Need to know if these two friends get past this kissing issue because... GOALS 😭😭💗"
Keep going!
"The flow of your narrative reads well. Double-check your spelling on a few things; I have the same issue, I use Grammarly, and it's a godsend for catching little mistakes. It will give a smoother read to your readers. I am looking forward to more of the story. "
