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Interesting

"I used to read stories like this a loot when I was younger and this really did take me back to those days. It had your typical, dangerous bad boy and your damsel in distress; a match you can't go wrong with. I'm not the biggest fan of cruel, senseless violence, but I did enjoy the overall story of being saved from an abusive environment and being treated with unsuspecting kindness. This is a good story and I hope to see more of it in the future ! "

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Thumbs up.

"wish that there was more action personally but other than that the romance is amazingly portrayed and with no spelling mistakes that I saw."

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Fire and Ice

"I find the story line to be quite interesting. The way the author introduces the characters and builds the plot around them is intriguing."

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Leaves you on the edge of your seat!

"Lovely story that will leave you on the edge of your seat, wanting more. Suspenseful and heartbreaking, and beautiful."

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Nice

"You did a good job on this. You were very descriptive and your work shows. Good job!"

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Craving more

"I was fascinated in the characters. Their storylines intrigued me, and I was obsessed. You have a really nice plot, but sometimes it can be a bit confusing. Just smoothing out those would help the story a lot. A very well written and imaginable book. I hope you continue to write!"

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