What is your opinion?
BRILLIANT
"There are hardly any words to use for my love of this story. Gorgeously written. I played it like a movie in my head. I could picture every single moment, and I was obsessed. I felt like Chapter 2 was lacking a little bit of dialogue, which I might've wanted more of. This is also only the first 3 chapter. 3 lovely chapters. I loved the sass of Morrigan's character. She liked to create mystery. I liked that. I love a good mystery. It always drew me in like, 'Why does she want her uncle dead? Does he have a fortune she wants? Is he mean?' I wanted more answers! You perfectly put me on edge which I really liked. This story has an amazing start, and I hope it has an amazing finish! I'll be watching this one!"
A Great Start
"The plot is very intriguing and I am curious as to where this is going. There is some real creativity here and the writing style is fairly advanced. A lot of detail to go off as well. Readers do well with a good hook and bite-sized chunks; they're more likely to consume more multiple small chapters as opposed to really long ones. Only a few minor spelling and punctuation errors. I recommend a Grammarly extension! Helps loads with finding all the little, overlooked mistakes :) Wonderful job so far!"
Devil's Tears
"I'm impressed with the author's creative tale as he shares with readers an old world setting in which his narrative unfolds. Attention had been paid in the emergence of his characters although I'd have preferred more action interspersed with the lengthy dialogue. I'd like to have my attention kept alive to the evolving tenants of the story as I'm taken deeper into it's mysteries. I applaud his efforts in the chosen setting in how I'm transported to a different place and time concurrent with the present time. There are opportunities for editing and grammar; that beast that assail all writers. A great tale for those avid readers of otherworldly beings."
