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Evanora

"I really enjoyed this story. I hope to read more from this author. "

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evanota

"very well written. it flowed smoothly and showed the horror laid on an innocent. the plot was an interesting change from most horrors, very subtle. as i mentioned in comments, it has a horror/chilfdern fairy tale feel to it. there were some typos and reverse of words such as he instead of her, simple typo. also, I don't feel that a 10 year old would use the word "shant". for some reason that word just jumped out at me. but, overall a very good story. looking forward to part #2. thank you for sharing."

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Evanora

"What a tragic story, a true fantasy. I love that she found true friends and family in nature and although I would like her to rediscover her innocence I would also like her to make the bullies suffer "

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Evanora

"Having been abused as a child I understand the anger and rage and sorrow she went through. It was a wonderful story gives people purpose and promise that they can survive "

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