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Then alpha rejected human mate

"This novel was amazing but it needs a second part, we need to know why the rouge wolf stops an does not attack her when they was in london an we need to know what happens with her an the unborn child. Beside that it was very well written."

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Alpha rejected human mate

"Love this book like the story line can’t wait for everyone to eat the words what spoken against her"

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The Alpha’s rejected human mate.

"Very good reading material. I want to know what happened in the end."

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The Alpha's rejected Human Mate

"The story is a nice one, please next chapter "

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The Alpha's Human Rejected Mate

"Why is he such an ass with her! I don't like him nor that Tatiana,. Feel sorry for Eden and I hope she gets away"

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Human

"I feel sorry for Eden. Hopefully when she turns 18 things will improve. Who knows maybe she’s a werewolf too. Fingers crossed "

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The alpha rejected human mate

"The plot of the story is good, the Alpha is not the usual robust type and seems to only react after an incident. Looking forward to seeing Cain and his wife's demise."

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♥ ♥

"I like the story 😌"

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Good read

"I like the story is not the “usual” werewolf story. I do have to figure out what an incorrect spelling of a word means. Overall I like it. "

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😤I would like to roll my eyes, but it's a little interesting.🙄😒

"Some of the spelling and punctuations aren't good. There are a lot of run on sentences, but I don't think any of you would care about that. The leading girl is an airhead who pretends to be strong. The leading man is an idiot who hates humans but love to have sex with them. It's interesting I can tell you that much, but you will get annoyed by a lot of things."

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Alphas rejected human mate

" I liked that the humans where not treated badly. The plot is interesting and suspenseful."

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Needs work

"I really wanted to get into this book but it needs to be proofread and fixed. The storyline is good but I just can’t get into it because all of the errors and stuff. So please fix that and you’ll have a great book! "

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Interesting But Needs Proofreading

"I like the POV of the mate bond through a human with no experience of the werewolf world. The bond hits her harder, leading her to pursuing the very man trying to reject her. The flow of the story also isn't bad in my opinion, it's moving forward steadily and things are being revealed at a decent pace. The grammar and spelling could use work and sometimes there's punctuation where there shouldn't be, while other times sentences will go on for a bit without punctuation to break them up. I like that the MC isn't a saint, she was a thief out of necessity and steals even though she no longer needs to. She also has a tendency to act out, intentionally riling up the alpha and confronting those who come after her and her friend. Jill's the voice of reason that Eden needs but still manages to never listen to."

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Grammer is very poor . Needs to be proofread by a professional before being published. Otherwise a good storyline.

"Very poor grammar. Needs to be proofread by a professional before being published. Otherwise it's a good storyline. "

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Not convinced

"I dislike how weak the main character is and how she steals for no reason. Even Jill has more self respect. I wish she gets better cause so far I can see why she shouldn’t be Luna smh "

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