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Tanda- The Cloak's Breath

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Summary

She’s a walking storm that hides behind clouds. He’s a prince who seems to get everything he wants. She’s used to death—another execution was just part of her job. But when the innocent man lay before her, something inside her began to darken. The prince was the one who ended it without a second thought. Then, a priest is found dead by an arrow, and a prince desperate for comfort decides it’s best to keep her within the castle walls—pulling her into chaos she never wanted to be part of. But her future was never meant to stay hidden behind clouds. She was meant to command them.

Status
8mo ago
Chapters
17
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

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She’s a walking storm that hides behind clouds. He’s a prince who seems to get everything he wants. She’s used to death—another execution was just part of her job. But when the innocent man lay before her, something inside her began to darken. The prince was the one who ended it without a second thought. Then, a priest is found dead by an arrow, and a prince desperate for comfort decides it’s best to keep her within the castle walls—pulling her into chaos she never wanted to be part of. But her future was never meant to stay hidden behind clouds. It was meant to command them.

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Hi there and welcome!

First of all, I am so glad you've decided to read this book as I spent quite a while on it. I hope you enjoy it truely.

I'm sure you want to get to the book and we will be soon, I just wanted to first put out a few statements about what this book has and a small summary.

Warning: This book contains violence, graphic details, loss and death, psychological trauma, and course language that could be triggering and offense. You read it at your own will.

This book is all fictional. People and events are all made up from my very imagination. I've spent an on going 3 years of finishing it and finally am comfortable with posting it because, being honest, I feel confident enough to do so.

Also, this is a psychological thriller. It's intense BUT there is romance. Whether is be healthy at first, please give it time. This book is suppose to be read with understanding and patience. I also tried to write it emotionally realistic. This book is dark but I've tried to balance it with some light, if that makes sense.

If there's anything confusing, ask! I would love to clear up some things/add if I need to because I have everything in my head and sometimes I forget to put it on pages and assume my reader knows!!

Also, my chapters are a little long, so I'm going to be doing it by parts of the chapter as 1-57. There are 35 chapters and 57 total scenes. I am going to be naming the chapters at some point because it makes sense for this book--and numbers are boring. I do updates on which chapters are uploaded on my wall and any other updates that are happening/changes.

Why comment on my authors wall and books? Personally, it gives me feedback and lets me know what you like most! My writing sometimes isn't clear as well, but sometimes I can't tell and you as a reader helps me see where clarity needs to be happening. On my wall it helps my readers understand that I'm active and I want them to comment so I can be interacting with you guys as much as I can. Interacting with your readers is honestly a blessing to do and I look forward to replying to as many as I can in my free time!

Now, I ask one thing from all my lovely readers. Please commmmenttt! It'll make me motivated to start on book two! (or a new book) I'm going to try to commit to posting a chapter (or two) daily.

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