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Great

"This story was amazing. I would recommend it to everyone that I know. I think your strong suit is your character portrayal. The way that you described them and then allowed them to speak in their own words was spectacular. "

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Love this world & concept!

"This book feels like a breath of fresh air. I was instantly drawn in with the prologue and chapters, and soon became incredibly invested in Everly's world. There's something cinematic yet intimate about the style of writing that I just love—and I can't wait for future updates! I would highly recommend this to anyone who is looking for an ongoing book to read & support, and of course will recommend it when it's completed!"

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Dark, but incredible!

"I thought this story has immense opportunity. A little dark at times, but I loved it! The smoothness of the chapters, and the creation you made spiked my interest. I really like this story for multiple reasons. One being this; I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Really fascinating! I really enjoyed this story! I hope you decide to keep writing! I'M LOVING EVERY LITTLE BIT!"

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So Far, Great

"Review for up to Chapter 10 This is an interesting novel. What I've read so far is easy, flows well (and I'm terrible with my attention span). Everly is a mess, super relateable. There is a lot of darkness depicted in this novel, so I warn others to be wary if triggered by these moments. I suggest placing trigger warnings just in case. I feel like I can step easily in Everly’s shoes and the realm built. And that's incredible. The writing is engaging, and it's a great piece for people who aren't too keen on fantasy. I'm reminded of The Sandman reading this. I hope more people read this. So 5/5 Keep updating! -Arienne "

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