Classic love story
Thirty or so chapters in and I have to say that I am loving the progression of each of the characters. The change in POV confused me at first, but once I got into the flow of the story it no longer became an issue. I love your style of writing, you can definitely see you progressing as a writer with each and every chapter. I would suggest going back through, just to correct a few minor spelling/grammar issues. Which I can tell are only minor overlooks and nothing more. I think both Ryan and Evelyn are characters that many people will be able to relate to, it feels very real and I can't wait to see where their love story takes them. I wish you all the best with your writing and I look forward to future updates.
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ps Just a little tip, something that I have learnt along the way, through years of writing. The first chapter is the selling point to any book. Make it something that catches the reader's attention, something that makes them not want to put the book down. Hope this helps,