The Amateur Critic

Till the final round

This was good but was way to fast. Not a lot of explanation or intriguing thought.

Hunter

The grammar was alright but southern folk don’t talk ‘dumb’ and ‘quirky’ as perceived in this book. They just have a drawl and natural slang. “Git” should still be written as “get”. Go on, get! Shortened words and slang should have an apostrophe. For example: What’re you talkin’ about? How ya’ doin’? As a southerner myself I have to admit I cringed quite a bit. However, other than that this book was good in that department! I wish we had more structured P.O.V’s though. It was hard to differentiate who was talking in some parts. I liked the plot and the story didn’t get off track. However, I do feel like the antagonist ‘Gabe’ was rushed. You don’t really read any present major problems, just strictly speaking of past experiences that have been bottled up. Kinda’ felt anticlimactic. That being said, I did enjoy this book. I smiled, laughed, and squeaked with glee! I hope to see more of your writing in the future. :)

Healing the heart of a cowboy

I loved this story, however there are some plot holes. Like Elliots involvement with the biker club. Jordan’s past with the mayor. Random Liam appearances but no detail. There were slight grammatical errors near the end but overall it was a cute story that I could definitely see myself rereading. Fix those minor accidents and this book will be..Muah! *chefs kiss* keep it up!

Felon

YASSSSSSSSSSSSS

Cat or cut

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think these characters should have a whole book written about them.

Like real people do

Slow-burn romance typically isn’t my cup of tea, but I couldn’t resist not reading this book! The first chapter had me hooked and I finished reading the book 6 hours later lol. I loved it

In the night

I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH IT GAVE ME ALL THE FEELS. 😭😭 THANK YOU!!! ❤️💞

Piece of cake

Another beautiful love story. Thank you. 🥰❤️

Mercy

Best werewolf story I’ve read in a long time

Beta Stone

I absolutely love your stories. I’ve been slowly but surly reading them all! Hope this rating puts a smile on your face! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us readers. 💞

The First She

One of the best books that I’ve ever read.

Doing it for the kids

Beautifully written.

When Maeve Met Caleb

Beautiful story, like always!

Reign

I loved this story

Baking Cupcakes

This book was good, but definitely needs editing. A lot of grammar errors. For example the definitions of sense and since are different please look into them. Follow is spelled wrong and very is spelled wrong throughout the book. Some sentences don’t flow, and there are holes in the story line. I think if you go back and edit each chapter and put more time in, that it will be a great book. Words are tricky but I know you’ll figure it out. Remember, if you don’t know something, GOOGLE. Haha. Anyways, thanks for the story. Good luck writing in the future.

Protected by a Bear

Loved this story

Fight on

I love this series

Bailing Out

I love this book

Loved by a Dragon

Perfect. Just perfect.

The Muse’s Touch

I NEED A SEQUEL! This story was so good I could not put it down. Paige and Davin are the cutest characters I’ve ever been blessed to read about. This story was perfect not to much drama. Not over analyzed. It was great. I will be keeping a eye out for the next one! Please do not leave it at a cliffhanger! Absolutely lovely. Cheers!

Fighting for control

I loved this story birdy and wolf were so cute. In the middle of the story was the most grammatical problems. Repeated words as well. For example “her her” or “the the” I love MC stories like this. They just always pull on those certain heart strings. I definitely recommend this book. Just make sure to go back a revise/edit! Thanks for this wonderful read. Hoping the slight cliff hanger to be answered in upcoming books. 😊

The Girl Who Fought To Provide

Absolutely amazing!! I loved Ava and Zaden. The story was full of love. Ava was so respectful and held so much dignity. She braved through everything. I read this book in two days because I could not put it down. I will be looking for a sequel. Keeping my fingers crossed that there is/will be one!!! Do not leave it on this ending cliffhanger! I need to see what happens! Love the book. 10/10 recommended. Everyone who sees this check it out!!!

His Angel

Super cute so far. Absolutely loving that it’s not to dramatic. Not a back and forth book. Which I love! I ship the main characters so hard and I love Xander with Jax.

Aviana

This book really breaks your heart at first. I loved this last chapter so far. Gunner and Avi are cute. Can’t wait for the next chapter to be released.

The Hellhound

I wish this book never ended. Luckily though, it’s part of a series!! I HIGHLY recommend this book. Especially if you love stories about sexy bikers lol. Check this story out!

Back To My Country Heart

LOVED THIS BOOK.

Collection of short stories.

Grammar definitely needs to be edited.

Trallia

Obviously not a finished story, BUT it was good.
I do believe you should add some more detail. Make the chapters a page longer or so.. Not an abundance but a bit more imagery would do nicely. The plot of the story is interesting and has made me intrigued to find out more. Punctuation is so/so. Grammar is okay. Don’t use so many “and’s” you do not want run on sentences! Off to a good start. 👍

Love An Eagle

I enjoyed this book. Cara and Lee were so cute together. The imagery was great as well! Especially where Cara is on the hike and sees Eagle for the first time. Definitely a fast paced story. Thanks for writing this!

Even Monsters Get Lonely

I loved this novel. A vampire story without loads of drama.

What I Needed

I definitely enjoyed this novel. It had action and suspense with loads of drama and romance. The Sloan family is unstoppable. A truly heart wrenching, soul sucking story. I could not put it down.

I do though believe this book should have been split in half to make another story about each individual biker. For example Deon and Eva. None the less, I still really enjoyed the other characters point of view.

Thank you for writing this story. Keep them coming! :)

Wyatt

*sighs*
This book had great promise in the beginning. It was cute and slightly mysterious. But there was no depth at all. No back stories about the problems with nix or razor. About her past and how she came to land up with the club besides needing a job. No writing to what was going on during the time skips. Just a simple boring explanation when she showed back up. Point of views were off the wire. It’s a book with two main characters and the rest are supporting for the story. The supporting don’t get random point of views smack dab in the middle of another persons. It’s like talking a test and all your focus is on them and then it’s ripped away from you because a fire alarm went off. The ending was horrible. She basically ignores him and then the “back to when we first met” re-do was so anticlimactic. Nothing but wasted time. It saddens me because I loved hunters book. This one was just not it. Overall, I wish I had read something else. Honestly, my feeling after reading this book… Meh.