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The Grave Goers

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Summary

The last thing Harlow J. Donavick remembers is seeing a white light and then it all goes black. Waking up in a coffin isn't a predicament most people find themselves in but it's Harlow's reality. Not knowing what happened to her, Harlow starts her adventure. Making some friends along the way; who are willing to show her the ropes. She'll finally start figuring out her past. What would you do if you woke up 6 feet under? 18+ for mature themes.

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2yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

The night was practically silent in Graves Cemetery on October 31, 2018. Cold and wispy was the wind as it rattled the bare oak trees. Not a living soul was walking the grounds, due to it being half past midnight. The only bodies that were there were the rotting corpses that lay six feet under. That is, until something peculiar happened. A heartbeat, thudding ever so faintly. *Thump* *Thump* *Thump* Sounds the heart as it echoes across the vast void of darkness. Slowly, it seems to grow louder and louder like tribal drums being played during a shaman ritual. Following the rhythm, the wind starts howling and crashes with the bare tree limbs. Shaking the grounds in a manner of which you can only imagine. Suddenly, as fast as a switch, it all goes silent.


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