Toddie

Great

I love this story and how this young man want to save his family. I can't wait to read more ,this story kept my attention all the way through

Great

I can't wait to read more ,because I want to know who are the two people that have been watching him and I really like this story.

Reality

That young women in this story could be telling the truth, but it hard to tell because of the dreams she been having. I think there is more to this guy in this story,then I can read about.So I have to wait to read more.Thank you

Mech

This story was okay but the overall story was really good.Wish there was an ending where Trevor brings her home

Mech

This story was kind of sad,but I enjoy it. It was through a warrior eyes which was kind of nice to have a story told by the warrior.

Time

This story brought memories of the time I had with my wife before I lost her to cancer and how she love her family and didn't care if she days or hours she was going to live it to the fullest, so thank you from the bottom of my heart and writing this story.

Fabulous

I never thought I would enjoy this story, but I had to see what drew me into this .I have to say it was the way it was written and left away that there could be more stories about the main character

Fan of King Arthur

This story was great, but I wish it would go on and tell the adventure of the boy

Is this a romantic story

This story reminds me of a start to a historical romance and which it leaves you wondering what happen.

Family

This story will be great to tell to the children I know. They would love this story and the way it ends