whatmendstheheart

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hello i am impressed with your work! i really like it! NICE JOB!!!! I suggest that you add on and not post it as complete work you should have more detail into the characters. I think that you didn't give them a large backstory and i wish you shared more. if you had that would help flare their personality

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