A.I. Medina

Houston

Fantasy, Adventure, Romance, and SciFi author and writer. Writing is Awesome!! Stop by and read something new today!

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Awesome Story!

Thank you for reviewing my story.. As promised, I review yours.

This story is unique to the core. It is in its own little world, but greatly expands. Sign me up, I want to be an agent at this division and receive my super human powers! There is great detail in the characters and the surroundings. Maybe a bit too much giving us little to visualize it to a further extent. I love the futuristic setting this story takes place in. It feels like I am reading an overpowered comic version of X-Men with the characters being able to do insanely cool things, beyond of what I have read in other stories. Definitely a great read for those of you who love to read late at night.

I could see this book getting its own TV series! Great job Michael!

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Want to read more

I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you write more and fill us in on what happens next.

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Intriguing!

Very interesting start. You build up the suspense nicely. I am curious as to why the jump from 1920 to 2020. I hope you write more to this story.

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I am amazed!

Your poetry is amazing! I like your choice of wording and how you express it. I would have love to read more! You have an amazing talent with your poetry. Great work!

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Read at night

As promised from my post, I am giving you a review, tis a bit overdue, but it is never too late.

I have enjoyed reading your story. I mostly read it at night since I would have more peace and quiet.

This is a different perspective of vampire and witch genre. I did not know a half-witch and half-vampire was even possible. Good mix however. I see that the vampires speak Bulgarian. I would have loved to see more translation of what they were saying, and interactions. Maybe some curse words or so towards our main character..

I really like how you make certain chapters stand out in detail. The way you describe the surroundings of what Leighton experiences is tough, sweet, and strange all in one.

It is very intriguing. That one surprise near the end was a big WOW moment. I will not spoil it for others, but definitely recommend to read and find out for themselves.. Great job and great story!

Friendly reminder, please review mine.

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Intriguing

I like your writing and description style. I also like how you keep the chapters flowing as each is its own little surprise. I am curious to see how this story turns out and would like to read more.

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Great story!! I would like to read more!

As stated, I will give you a review of your story.

Your characters are introduced well and the plot develops little by little. I like how descriptive you are in letting the reader know what the feelings and emotions are that the characters are going through, like when they growl or have that awareness.

If you can remove the numbers of words at the start of your chapters because it may cause certain readers to turn away as they may see it as too much to read. No book really contains the number of words on top. Rather, let the reader dwell into your story and even if it is 1,000 words or less, that is why we read. Our minds won't register the number of words regardless.

In one of your chapters, you state that you forgot to add in an attribute to your character, Arianna's shyness. I would recommend to take out that part completely and add in the shyness somewhere in the beginning to your story to fit. This way, we will know from the start how she is and the story flows and continues without interruption. You need to also capitalize the beginning of most of your sentences. If you write directly on Inkitt platform, copy your text to Microsoft Word and run a quick spell check. Or use another Word Processor to spell check there. Once complete, copy the text over back to Inkitt and this will at least help you with grammar and punctuation. Most important, save your work!

Overall, great story! I love how Arianna is finding out things and it is all a mystery as to why. Keep writing and finish this book! Cheers!

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Super interesting from the start

I was hooked on how you started describing everything in great detail. I can imagine the settings and environment perfectly.. I've yet to finish your story, but I am fascinate by the way you make everything flow. and make sense.. Great story!

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