Sarah Jordan
@xRandoxBoston, MA
Hey! None of my stories are edited and yes, I do appreciate feedback, just be kind. I have dyslexia and have definitely missed a handful of mistakes while proofreading.
I like Andy already
Great start! I can’t wait to see Chris and Andy’s characters develop throughout the story and I can’t wait for this love triangle to start. I do wish there was some character descriptions, especially Andy. What does he look like? Also why is Chris asking him out now? It seems that they have an interesting past together, did she always have a crush on him? Aside from that this was a fun read! The characters already have a lot of personality. I can’t wait for Andy’s POV!
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I don’t normally read books with third person pov because it’s hard for me to connect to the main character(s) but that was not the case! From the first paragraph I was hooked and the author is talented to say the least. This is so amazingly written. I can feel for Liam in the couple of chapters that I’ve read so far and I can picture everything happening as if I were watching a movie. The author is very talented and the way they describe places, people, things, etc. is on another level, complex but still in layman’s terms. The descriptive details also didn’t take away from the story, it’s perfectly balanced. *Chefs kiss*
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