Zach Hughart

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You make it hard for me to find faults in your book. You do put into the people into my mind as if I am onlooker to the acts taking place. There was no slow parts in the story which was nice. Keep up the good work and give us some more. I know good stories when i see it and you have gotten it down here today.
The main thing that ate at me was the overly long paragraphs. It can be off putting to have such paragraphs. They are not wrong but it makes me want to skim over the longer paragraphs.

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