DarkPhoenix

A very engaging read!

The story is fast-paced right from the start, but at the same time manages to delve into details about the characters and back story. The plot is unique and the story is easy to follow despite new character additions. Another round of proofreading can help with grammar, tense usage, etc. Excited to see where Amera and Chris' journey takes them. Great Job!

Fluid storyline

I liked the way the plot was structured as it slowly unraveled the backstory of the main protagonists. Overall, it was quite engaging and fast-paced, peppered with a little humor to uplift the sad bits. Another round of proofreading should take care of minor grammatical errors. Looking forward to the subsequent updates. Great job!

Unique plot

After having read the first 10 chapters, I must say that the plot is very unique and makes for a refreshing read. There are a lot of sections (particularly, the action scenes) that have been described really well with tons of imagination added in. If the dialogues can be better structured, the conversations would be easier to follow. Overall, I am thoroughly enjoying this good piece of work. Great job!

An extremely engaging read

I was able to read through all the 23 Chapters in a single sitting. The story is well thought out and pretty engaging. Love the authentic depiction of the characters. Brilliant stuff! Can't wait for another update. Great job!