Eva S.

Very interesting

First of all, congrats- I really enjoyed the 7 chapters you have published so far! I rarely get surprized when I read something, I usually anticipate what is going to happen, but there were several occasions where your story made my eyebrows raise, so very good.
I did very much enjoyed the plot and I am looking forward to seeing what will happen next in the story.
Just a few minor notes:
1. This is more of a personal preference, but I feel like the story could benefit from a past tense story telling (maybe it's just me).
2. Look out for spelling, a few occasions where names and sentences weren't capitalized.
3. On some of the chapters is doesn't say at the start from whose perspective it is and it is a bit confusing for the first 1-2 lines.
Overall, enjoyed it very much, keep doing what you are doing.

Honest

I love how honest this story was.
The characters were all nicely portrait and even without the notice I think one would have been able to pick up that the story is based on real-life experience and relationships.
A few grammar and stylist errors, but nothing that cannot be fixed with some more editing.
Overall very good story and as said before, very honest and real.

Interesting & Promising

I really liked the story. I especially the friendship between the girls, very honest and realistic.
The overall plot of the story is definitely very engaging and interesting. A page turner, as we would have said if it was in a physical copy hah.
The only advice I can offer to the very promising writer is to edit a bit more and go over some of the spelling.
Another tip, which may be useful, would be, in my opinion, if the writer was more consistent with the tense in which the story is told. I noticed in several of chapters that half a sentence is in present time and then sudden the other half in past tense.
Lastly, and I think I saw that someone had already mentioned it- don't be as descriptive. It is difficult when writing, I know, I do it too, but there doesn't need to be that much description following the dialogue.
Loved it, would recommend it and would definitely keep reading it.

Catching

Definitely a very catching story that engages the reader.
I like the characters and their development and especially the little conversations that Saf has with herself in her own head.
I did find it strange that the story is told in present time, not that it is not good, but just a little strange, in my opinion.
Overall, I very much liked the story so far and I am looking forward to seeing what is to happen next.

good

very good poem- I really enjoyed reading it.

Touching

The story is very sad and touching. I loved how you have provided such amazing description of the nature, the weather and the emotions of the characters.
Definitely a something I would recommend.