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The fifth poem is very impressive, and it inspired me to add a few words: Time ages and decays, / if you don't fight well .... Time heals all, / but does it heal beyond the space-time continuum ? Writing reminds all, / monkey times Humans forget all, / monkey times

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Review for Somebody poem

It;s nice that you write poetry, but the way I see it , if you tell your kids they're somebody they become nobody; and if you tell them they're nobody they become somebody. Usually parents tell them both , it depends which one you believe

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A review from the East

Chapter 1 The untold truths... that's like the communist that was waiting to attack behind the door when I was getting out for milk ? the flow of emotions... that's like when I start running to avoid a devilish experience ? Chapter 2 Love is a medicine we need to survive... well see, communists for example they hate so they can survive, they wouldn't understand your poem Chapter 3 The third chapter has a real touch, I like it

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