Letty22

Interesting History

I love history, and I feel this has a lot of potential. Try to extend your writing and be careful with the punctuation.

Suspense and Murder

I read about the DeFeo family murders, and this caught my interest. I like the suspense in the beginning, but it would be nice if there were a few more scary scenes. However, it is an interesting read.

Beautiful Tragedy

The poem hooked me, and the ending was unexpected. I loved it!

Love Werewolf

I really love the plot of this story. I don't get to read many stories with Native American characters. I look forward to reading more!

Interesting story

I like all the twists and turns and the ending was quite unexpected but different. Try to write a little longer so the stories flow. Either way, nice work.

Poetry

The writing style is very interesting. I'm not good with poetry, but even though the poems are short, they hold meaning. I also find it new that after poems a long chapter is written. Keep up the great work.

Viking

I like Viking stories. The story plot is fascinating, and I look forward to more updates!

Erotic

This was a good short story. I liked how detailed it was and it hooked the reader!

Interesting

I am into history and fantasy and it's a good read. and it was nicely written

Interesting Story

I'm not used to such endings, but it was a nice read! I do wish it was a bit longer, but overall I loved the story!