Maren Hayes

Great story!

A few grammatical errors, but this story is great so far! Hopefully Violet gets out of her own way soon!

Loving it!

Just checking back. I really love what you've written so far, definitely hopefully you'll publish more. ❤❤

Great so far!

I think there has only been a couple of things that jumped out at me as mistakes? But not anything significant. I really enjoy how Liam and Elle's relationship is slowly developing. It's more realistic than having her instantly jump into his bed after everything she was put through. Healing takes time! I hope the author gives Elle a happy ending!

I want to like it.

I feel like this story is treating abuse as some sort of romantic thing and really it make the story cringy. I want to like it! The idea behind the story is great, but I feel lunge the two main characters need a lot of work and I hope the site would take a minute to think about how he is putting out the idea that being physically and emotionally abusive is somehow attractive or romantic. I do love that our heroine is finally standing up for herself a little.