Shaik Afreen

Two of a kind.

This book is amazing and I loved the plot and the way you build the story and characters though there are few grammatical errors, it's nice overall.

Awesome

I loved the the way you described emotions in this poem. You have written beautiful lines. Keep on writing.

The cafe

I loved the plot and in between I got confused between characters. You have a great future, keep on writing. Waiting for more updates. Eager to know what happens next. All the best champ 👍

Interesting

The plot is quite unique and sounds interesting. You did it well. Waiting for more updates. All the best dear.

Bibliophile

Your literature and writing skills are simply superb. The way you describe each scene it's like everything is happening in front of my eyes. The words you use are captivating and scenes can be imagined easily. I really liked you descriptive skills (i.e. In a scene you have described about the car. It's both sarcastic and sad truth) The girl's character is quite interesting..She is desperate for a book.. Its good. I forgot to say.. At the beginning of the chapter you wrote unedited right. It indirectly piqued my interest haha ha😊. You are a great writer indeed. Last but not least chapters in your book are too lengthy. Please try to reduce the size of the chapter because at a point of time people usually skip few paras and continue reading other to get to know about the story. They might miss the amazing words and description in between. Why to let it waste.. Please decrease the size of the chapter.