Simon Raven

Cambridge

Eros and Thanatos, Life and Death, are the main streams of human life, which is a mixture and a texture of both. I try and write about them.

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I want to say two basic things.
The story is good, the plot is absurd enough to seem real, or, at least I found myself wondering if something like this could really happen and was not so sure to say no. And this is the good news.
If an amateur writer like me can advice something I would suggest to review the grammar because apart from the slang that I personally find intriguing, some grammar connections sound terribly bad and this is a pity because they keep the reader's attention away from the story. Keep writing, I'm sure you can get better.

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