Desmond Chamutinya Wattpad:@Slaughterkid27

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The Rotting Flesh (Escatology) book 1

As always the author introduces a story set apart from the rest, a different and twisting plot that only renders the reader prey to its twists and turns. Grammar and punctuation is overall good but there are a lot of missing words or phrases in the text. Also, detail must be increased (which the writer will do once he edits). The story is a good read and anyone looking for entertainment should try it

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Neat

This is a good beginning for a good crime novel. Keep up the good work

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Neat writing

This summary is neat it makes the reader want to read more ,it has potential of becoming a page turner

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