ThatRandomToon

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DAMN

GOD DAMN THIS IS FANTASTIC
Bare with me, this is gonna be hard to explain.
It's descriptive in a menacingly accurate way. I feel like the shadiest parts of my mind have been picked apart. When you read, you feel so immersed it's as though there's nothing else in the world.
Except the colors.

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Fantastic!

I'm really enjoying this read! I have no idea if this is abandoned or anything, but I'm going to write a review anyways!
The grammar could use some refinement, but it isn't so bad that it makes the sentence structure incomprehensible. I'm also a little confused about how the world has gone to shit and why? I'm sure if the story continues it'll clear some things up, but as of now I feel a bit in the dark.
I love the descriptions, they're fantastic! They immerse you further into the story and I can't even explain how amazing it is.
The character development? Amazing! How the author writes from the point of view of both Amanda and Bailey not only contributes to the overall feel of the story, it also immerses the reader PHENOMENALLY. While reading, I INHERITED Amanda's thoughts and feelings. It was like I was her!
Overall, MWAH, piece of FRIGGIN ART

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Mr. Eyes

This is FANTASTIC! It's very descriptive, the way the author descries the feeling the character gets when Mr. Eyes is near. I'm not sure what it is, but it keeps you hooked until the very end! I wish it could've lasted a little longer, but it was still amazingly thought out. If you love the thrill of mystery, and you like to get chills up your spine, this is where you've gotta go.

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