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The Pinnacle

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Summary

For my LA class, we had to write a personal narrative. This is the story of me overcoming my fear of roller coasters. (READ DISCLAIMER FIRST)

Status
Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Disclaimers

Heyo! So, in LA we had to write a personal narrative that had to have a lesson at the end of it. This was hard for me to do because, honestly, my life isn't very interesting. However, I eventually came up with a story that happened not too long ago. In August 2020, actually.

This story follows me, Toon, getting over my fear of roller coasters. No places or names in this story are accurate.

-My name isn't actually Toon

-My sister's name isn't Rebecca and my brother's name isn't Jake

-The rides' names and the park's names have been altered so you can't figure out where I live

-And finally, I don't actually live in Pennsylvania, it just sounded the best as opposed to my actual state.

Also, I just seperated the story into parts based off of Inkitt's recommendations, there aren't really chapters.

Anyways, enjoy!


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