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I absolutely love reading and to come across this book for a review swap was a great idea.
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This book has so much potential, and I really felt like the author cares about her characters. The plot line was a great idea, I love the idea of letting fate decide how the characters would meet. I hope I don't upset you with my review as I don't want it to come across negative it's just ways I think you could improve the book and really show your potential.
The reasons for my scoring are:
1. The descriptions: I wanted to know what the characters looked like, the places they visited and what things looked like. The readers senses are a magical thing and I really think you should expand on this. It draws the reader in even more and allows them use their imagination.
2. Storyline: I really enjoyed the storyline and how you pieced it together. I do believe you are treading close to other romance novel so just be careful with that.
3. Language and writing: I love the writing style, using POV's is a great way to convey a characters emotions and feelings. I feel like you should expand on this, allow the characters to display their emotions fully. Your language with the characters should portray them. I felt like the same person was talking all the way through instead of being able to differentiate between them.
Overall this is a really good story and I would encourage you to work on it further because you have a great imagination.
This review wasn't meant in a negative way, please continue writing your stories and I look forward to reading more :) xxx