Erin Nicole

A good read overall

It’s a good book with a few plot holes. It can be a bit over descriptive in some places making you feel like you just want the book to get to the point but the overall story telling allows the reader to forgive the breathy feel that some spots have. Overall a good read

Hard to read.

Let me start with the positive. You have raw talent for writing and if you slowed down a bit you could really utilize that talent. However, the plot seemed to be a mess and had a lot of holes, like the dad appearing out of nowhere. And the fact that the alpha said he would risk death even though his life isn't on the line. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors and somethings are definitely rushed. Take your time and breathe a bit. Hopefully you will consider combing through and editing this book so it becomes what it has the potential to be.

Great book.

Great story and plot. It's a little hard to follow grammatically but there is plenty of room for improvement which means this book can only get better.