Lizebelle

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Review of 'Forest of Time'

Loved it, the grammar could use some work tho. This is a perfect book for people who don't care about capitalization. The plot is amazing, and I could see it turning into an interesting romance story in the future. If you want to improve your grammar, then I suggest reading and studying officially published books in order to get a good grasp at it.

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Review of 'The Silent Overthinker'

This is a compelling and sensational book which always finds a way to get me emotional. 'The Silent Overthinker' is the definition of a good read for pre-teens and teenagers alike. But, incorrect grammar and punctuation really matters to me and the fact that this book isn't to big on that, for myself, means something. Please try to make an effort on such things, for example, asking a person to read over your work before publishing a new chapter. Besides that, I love 'The Silent Overthinker', and am constantly enthusiastic whenever I see a new chapter open for reading here.

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Review for 'Dying Roses'

I love how insightful and deep most of the chapters are. They might not be the traditional long length of the chapters made by other authors here, but you makeup for it with the topics and questions you ask. That being said, grammar is very important to me, and when ever I see a mistake in such a beautiful peice of writing, my heart breaks. So, maybe you should ask somebody to review your chapters before you submit them. But, besides that, this is a wonderful collection of thoughtful work.

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Review of 'The Wrong Blue Eyes'

With every chapter the story grows on me. I wouldn't be surprised if I later give the story a five start rating. It is capable of being full of suspense and drama. You should continue writing in your voice, after all, the more you use it, the better and more experienced it gets.

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Review of 'Hidden'

I'm only able to read the first chapter and it's already a favorite of mine. My views of the first chapter are incredibly positive. Not to mention, that the book is full of mystery and is keeping me wondering. I have no complaints. There is no doubt about it, an incredible read.

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Enjoyed it!

I love your plot, it has amazing imagination. All of the characters show realistic reactions and realy make me feel as if I'm a part of the story. The only thing that I could possibly comment on, is your spelling and grammar. Maybe, you should re-read your work after you finish a chapter in order to flush all of the mistakes out. Your writing is amazing and I always seem to come back to your story, no matter what.

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