Daisy

@desireevonkGelderland

I'm a thirty-eight year old mom of two beautiful children. I love reading fantasy and romance stories and I hope you enjoy reading my own!

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Great story

Your story is very sweet! I liked the match between an Alpha and an omega, as that isn't really 'normal' between wolves. And for a short story you put just the amount of emotion in it, to keep it interesting to read. If it weren't for being a mom, I would have read it in one go! Can't wait for the sequel! Keep up the good work! 😘

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Great short story!

Even though it was rather obvious to me that they would come back together, it was still a story that I wanted to read in one go! I love the direct talking and the roughness of all the things they said. I appreciate people being direct to me, so this was a fresh read, compared to all the mushy stories! The smut was well written too! Good job author!

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The first she

I love the humour, i love their banter and strange use of words! This book is amazing, and i cant wait to start reading the next!

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Weavers

I really like this book! It is something quite different than all the books I have read so far, which is a good thing. I'll be looking forward to read the sequel!

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Great writing!

The title says alot, but it really isn't true. Without trying to give away to much spoilers, I think that you have given shaughna a perfect character. You make the reader feel sympathetically towards her, even though she doesn't have the most acceptable way of lifestyle. For the majority of people that is. I also like that you write a little about racism, not exponentially overdoing it, as it's not the point of your story, but just enough to keep the readers reminded, that it actually still happens. Love the 'intimacy', and the way you explain all their feelings. Thanks for gifting us with your story! 💛💚💙

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Thrilling story!

The minor mistakes in words, doesn't weigh up to all the good and thrilling action that is written so well. If normal things in life, wouldn't have kept me from taking a pause in reading sometimes, I would have read this book in one go. One day in fact. Love the characters, love the deceive, and love the end. Well done!

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Labyrinth

I really liked your description of the labyrinth. And I loved the miced emotions between losing one family and gaining another. Well done!

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The lost princess

I have binge read it in one day! Love your story writing. You keep the tension just enough, not too long to get bored. I love the characters, you explain their behaviour perfectly. Keep up the food work! And if you ever like to read someone else's fantasy, romance story, please give my book a try! 💛💚💙

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Sexy bodyguard.

I really love the progress of your book! It is fun, exciting and a treat to read. It was for work and travel that i didnt got the chance to read it all at once, otherwise I would have! 😄 The characters are fun, not too much detailed in description, (Love the mom!) to leave a gap open for the readers imagination. And even though the age difference is substantial, their love doesn't feel awkward at all. Have fun in writing the sequel. You got a vote from me!

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Nice book.

I liked this book, although some parts reminded me of fifty shades of grey. You have some great imagination so I advice you, to use it more often, to make it more of your own. It was captivating me though, to read the whole thing. Keep up the good work!

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