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Their Screams are Silent

I found your story very intriguing and suspenseful so far, though I agree with the person above me that there should be more build up before the action.
I think you should spend more time fleshing out the main character's personality. Right now, I have no idea what cliche she belongs to in her school, so it's hard to get a sense of where the story's going next with her.
Overall, I think you're off to a great start, and I love your title! <3

P.S. I also noticed a small typo where you wrote 'certian' instead of 'certain'. Otherwise, everything looked good!

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nice character

I like your writing style, and Rose already seems very sweet and relatable! Though the first chapter does tell a lot about Rose's relationship with her friends and family, there isn't really anything in the plot to draw the reader in.

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