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Girls of a Feather

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Summary

Ever since 15-year-old Annemie saw Antsje Pluk, the fairytale figure who supposedly eats children for dessert, she's known that the witch will come for her. Now that she's no longer a child, the forest doesn't scare her anymore. One night, she sneaks out. But instead of returning safely in the morning, Antsje Pluk curses and captures Annemie, bringing her to a cottage hidden deep in the woods. Girls have been disappearing from their village for years, but Aleta, Annemie's twin sister, won't let her become one of the lost. In order to save her sister, Aleta must face her fears head-on, find a magical flower, confront an evil witch, and break an age-old curse. Luckily, she has the guidance of an old friend, but the other girl is not what she seems, and there are secrets hidden in the woods. Sprinkled with Dutch lore, this retelling of a neglected fairytale is filled with witches, moss maidens, and shape-shifting, but it all comes down to some very human traits: bravery, sacrifice, and most of all, love.

Status
Complete
Chapters
21
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

prologue

“Once, there was a witch named Antsje Pluk, and she liked to hide in the forest,” the story begins. “She loved children - after all, everyone knows they’re delicious. She would sprinkle them with salt before gobbling them whole, stuffing them into her mouth and licking their blood off her fingers like it was sugar. She’d eat them if they were fat, lean, old, young, boy, girl - but she wouldn’t eat any nice children, only the naughty. Because only the naughty play in the forest after dark. She comes to you just after you breathe a sigh of relief, thinking you’re safe, creeping up behind you like a shadow. She’s as tall as a tree and as thick as a trunk, and don’t let her old age fool you. If she finds you, there’s no escape. She’ll drag you to her cottage, deep in the woods where no one can hear your screams or see your footprints, and she’ll pop you into her mouth like candy.”

The twin girls gulped, gripping each other’s hands in fear. The wind groaned as it blew, rattling the house and the girls. They jumped up, running to the table and cowering underneath it.

“Hush, hush,” Mam soothed, bending down to stroke their foreheads. “You don’t need to worry about Antsje Pluk. You know better than to play in the forest after dark, and I’ve raised you girls to be nice, not naughty.”

"Ja, Mam,” they chorused. They were both still afraid, but they knew better than to say anything. After all, they were good girls, and good girls didn’t question their mothers.

Mam pulled them to their feet, smoothing out the wrinkles in their nightgowns. She herded them toward their bedroom, but one of the girls stayed behind.

She waited until her sister and mother were out of the room before racing over to the window. She peered into the woods, looking for a sign to prove her mother’s story. All she saw was trees, their limbs dipping with the weight of time, and a bird, barely visible through the interwoven branches.

She relaxed, her fear fleeing like the night at dawn, but something caused her to stiffen. The bird had turned to face her, and its eyes shone white, so bright they pierced through the darkness. Behind it, a shadowy figure grew and grew until it was as tall as a tree and as wide as a trunk.

The bird startled into the air, cawing as it flew toward the house. It crashed into the window with a loud thud. The girl jerked away, watching as it slid to the ground in a mess of blood and feathers. She looked up to find the shadowy figure gone, but she knew who it was.

It was Antsje Pluk, and the heks had spotted her. She knew it.

She was coming for her.

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